Revision Worksheet



Reader____________________________ Author ______________________

Directions: Read at least two compare/contrast papers in your group. Fill out the form below for each author. Give it to him/her to use to make revisions. Do not "proofread" for editing errors yet. If some error stands out, you may mark it now, but that is not your primary task.

1. Identify the two schools whose home pages are being compared.



2. Identify the three main areas of comparison and contrast. (This should be obvious in the thesis statement. If it is not, mark this item with an asterick <*>.


3. Write the best topic sentence of the three paragraphs here.


4. Write the best paragraph hook here.


5. Write what the author thought to be best about the home pages viewed.



Return this sheet to the author. (The authors will turn this in with their papers for both reader and author to receive credit.)

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